Wednesday 22 June 2016

Funny Dog Tom

Mrs Ellis visited with her dog Tom today in class so
we could write a character description about him
Tom the dog has brown eyes. He is furry, funny and cute with a pink tongue and white whiskers. With four legs he's a loving dog with sharp teeth. Tom smells like rubbish and paint spots. He is cheeky with a black nose. Tom is a crazy Golden Retriever with gold eyes. He has got a hair cut. Tom eats kids dirty food. He is as big as a tiger, and he's got black paws. Tom never has a shower and if kids just touch him, he could bite them.

By Hansim

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