Showing posts with label Hansim. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Hansim. Show all posts

Wednesday, 22 June 2016

Funny Dog Tom

Mrs Ellis visited with her dog Tom today in class so
we could write a character description about him
Tom the dog has brown eyes. He is furry, funny and cute with a pink tongue and white whiskers. With four legs he's a loving dog with sharp teeth. Tom smells like rubbish and paint spots. He is cheeky with a black nose. Tom is a crazy Golden Retriever with gold eyes. He has got a hair cut. Tom eats kids dirty food. He is as big as a tiger, and he's got black paws. Tom never has a shower and if kids just touch him, he could bite them.

By Hansim

Monday, 6 June 2016

The Wicked Windy Tornado


Tornado spins around and around,

twirl and whirl,

and they can touch the ground. 

Powerful and windy storm, 

blows my front lawn down.

By Hansim