Great Tom is Mrs Ellis dog. He's a boy dog, he is a Golden Retriever. He's naughty, funny and crazy dog too. Tom is loving dog to me and a ginger furry dog. Tom has a collar also he has a chain to hold him. He's a cute soft dog. He has sharp teeth pink tongue and has four legs. He has big round eyes that have blonde eyelashes. Tom has a black nose that is a good smell. He steals food from inside the house. Tom likes paint and his furry body. Tom wants to be a inside dog. I like Tom.
By Ae
Wednesday 22 June 2016
Awful Tom
Tom is a golden retriever. Tom is very cheeky and sneaky. His favourite thing to do is sit on someone's lap.
Tom is a loving and naughty dog too. He is very furry and he is cute too. Mrs Ellis is Tom's owner.
Tom loves to hunt and he loves food.He has a black nose and four legs. Tom has some small dimples and painted spots. Tom is a gingery colour dog for his colour.
Tom has a collar for his chain.He has sharp teeth and shaven spots. Tom has white whiskers and he makes a loud and funny noise.
I love Tom because he is cute,funny and cheeky.
By Celestina
Funny Dog Tom
Mrs Ellis visited with her dog Tom today in class so we could write a character description about him |
By Hansim
Tom The Funny Dog
Tom lives with Mrs Ellis. He is a big dog and he likes to steal food from the bench.
Tom has two eyes that has golden eyelashes. Tom is a funny, crazy, loving, cute dog and he has a collar that is tied around his neck.
Tom has four legs and a pink tongue. Tom is naughty but is always funny and he makes a funny noise.
He likes to get garbage out of the bin. He barks and he smells really bad.
He is a golden retriever dog and he has white whiskers. He likes food when he is hungry.
I think Tom is a really cute dog.
By Judelexus
Funny Crazy Tom
Crazy Tom is ginger and blonde dog. He has a dark black nose with golden shiny eyebrows. He also has a pinkish tongue with very sharp teeth. He has got dark brown dimples.
He is funny, crazy, big, fair, cute and loving. When you rub his ears he will make a funny noise. Sometimes Tom can be very naughty.
Tom smells like paint. He also smells funny and smelly. He barks a lot and he is a boy.
I love Tom because he is cool, happy, loving and he is great.
By Julian
Sunday 19 June 2016
Dear Diary
Tonight I looked up at the stars and saw the seven stars of Matariki. They were shining so brightly that I almost went blind. I was so happy to see the seven sisters. Then I ran inside and I told my family. They were so proud of me for spotting the seven stars of Matariki.
By Julian
Dear Diary
Tonight I looked up at the stars and saw the seven sisters. They were really big. I saw the bright stars forming a monkey and an umbrella, next I grabbed a cup of drink, then I saw the bright moon just sitting there.
By Ardmore
By Ardmore
Thursday 16 June 2016
Dear Diary
Tonight I looked up at the stars and saw the seven sisters. As I looked up I saw a shooting star zooming around and it made a picture of the seven sisters. Suddenly one winked at me. Then I had to go home, and the star waved good bye.
By Celestina
Wednesday 15 June 2016
Dear Diary
Tonight I looked up at the stars and saw the seven sisters which is the same as the seven stars. One was big, which means it was the oldest out of the seven sisters. The seven stars were so bright and they had four pointy corners.
By Lauralye
Mr Crazzy Dancer
Mr Dancer has grey hair but mostly bald. His face is wrinkly just like the fantastic waves. His eyes are black like the beautiful night sky. Mr Crazzy Dancer has a sharp nose thats like a sword. He has a blue coat that looks like the glorious sky, under his coat is a white t-shirt. Mr crazzy Dancer has dark blue pants like lovely water and has dark brown shoes like chocolate.
By Kane
Monday 13 June 2016
Dear Diary
Tonight I looked up at the stars and saw the bright seven stars of Matariki. I showed my family. My family and I were looking at the seven stars moving in the sky. It went dark so we needed to go sleep.
From A'e
Wednesday 8 June 2016
EARTHQUAKES!!!!
Earthquakes can damage cars and buildings. The ground cracks in a earthquake. Some people can die, they get stuck under and in buildings. When an earthquake comes you need to drop, cover and hold
By Matutu
Monday 6 June 2016
Terrible Tornadoes
One Saturday night I was in my house watching TV then the power turned off. I was sitting all alone in my room. Bang! What was that I said to myself I quickly ducked under my blanket waiting for my mum and dad to walk in. They came running into my bedroom and hid under my blanket too. I can hear the window rattling. The trees outside were banging on the wall outside the house. Me and my mum and dad hid in the closet until the tornado ripped my house apart. I was so afraid I hugged my parents so tight. I walked out of my closet and saw the destruction the tornado did to my house. My neighbours house was gone too. I felt so sad my dog was missing. I cried so hard.
By Riuroa
By Riuroa
The Wicked Windy Tornado
Tornado spins around and around,
twirl and whirl,
and they can touch the ground.
Powerful and windy storm,
blows my front lawn down.
By Hansim
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